Prepared by: Rhéal Nadeau
Posted on: November 15, 2003
By the way, this week marks a milestone
for Practice-W - this is the
100th
exercise (or exercise variant) to be posted on this list.
In the past week, we have been remembering
something from our past,
remembering
our feelings and emotions at the time, and looking at how those might
have
changed us or changed our choices and decisions later on. (You can see
last
week's exercise at:
http://www.internetwritingworkshop.org/pwarchive/pw99.shtml
)
Of course, the goal of the Remembering
exercises is not just to talk
about our
past, but to explore those emotions so we can better use them in our
writing.
Just as emotions affect us, and influence (or at times even control)
our lives,
so do emotions affect our characters - all of them, from the
protagonist and
antagonist down to the most minor characters (though we may not show
all those
emotions, we do need to make sure that all characters have their own
reasons
for their actions.) This is true not only in fiction, but in
non-fiction as
well - often it is useful to wonder what experiences or emotions drive
the
actions of the people we might write about (from George W. Bush waging
war in
Iraq to the sweet old lady who feeds the pigeons in the park.) What
makes them
who they are, what causes them to make the choices they make?
So this week, take the emotion (or set of
emotions) you explored
last week, and
use it in a fictional scene. Show how that emotion (or a mix of
emotions)
determine or at least influence the character's actions. In a classic
example,
fear might lead someone to run away - or else, might inspire an act of
bravery.
Someone who has suffered loss might be afraid of new relationships, or
might
crave them.
(If you didn't do the exercise last week,
or if you want to use a
different
emotion than the one you wrote about, then do last week's Remembering
exercise
now - just for yourself. Don't submit it, but think of a moment in your
life,
take the time to remember what that moment felt like, then use that in
doing
this week's exercise.)
Remember to *show* the emotions - what it
actually feels like to the
character
- rather than just telling us. (In other words, don't use words like
"fear" or
"anger" or whatever, but *show* those emotions in action.) Use what you
explored in last week's (and any previous) remembering exercises -
focus on
the sensations, not on the names of the emotions. So don't say a
character
was angry, but instead show what that character is actually feeling.
Don't use the actual scene you used last
week; use the *emotions"
you
experienced at the time in creating a different fictional scene. Last
week the
requirement was to use a real incident from your life. This week, the
requirement is to create a fictional scene, with a fictional character,
but to
use our own experiences as background.
Word count: 300 words.
Have fun!
Rhéal
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