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Exercise: Death, in a sense

These exercises were written by IWW members and administrators to provide structured practice opportunities for its members. You are welcome to use them for practice as well. Please mention that you found them at the Internet Writers Workshop (http://www.internetwritingwor kshop.org/).

Prepared by: Bob Sanchez
Posted on: Sun, 7 May 2006

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"When lilacs last in the door-yard bloom'd, And the great star early droop'd in the western sky in the night, I mourn'd--and yet shall mourn with ever-returning spring."

Walt Whitman writes these opening lines about the death of Abraham Lincoln, evoking a feeling of great sadness without immediately mentioning death and without ever mentioning the President. Later in the poem, he breaks a sprig of lilac. Birds warble their lament, church bells toll, long and winding processions solemnly accompany a coffin, and the poet places the sprig of lilac on that coffin. The poem certainly mentions death, but you get a clear idea of what's going on without those mentions.

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THE EXERCISE:

In 300 words or less, write a scene, a description, or a story implying someone or something has died...a friend, a public figure or a dream, a hope, an era, etc.

Try to avoid explicit references. Allow the reader to sense what happened, or perhaps infer it.

When critiquing a submission consider whether the essay strikes an appropriate mood, and whether the reader can deduce what's happened.




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