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IWW
Practice-W Exercise Archives
Exercise: Similes at work
These exercises were written
by IWW members
and administrators to provide structured practice opportunities for its
members.
You are welcome to use them for practice as well. Please mention that
you found
them at the Internet Writers Workshop
(http://www.internetwritingworkshop.org/).
Prepared by: Ruth Douillette
Posted on: Sunday, January 13, 2008
Reposted on: Sunday, August 9, 2009
Reposted on: Sunday, October 17, 2010
Reposted on: Sunday, September 29, 2013
Reposted on: Sunday, Februrary 22, 2015
Reposted on: Sunday, January 10, 2021
Reposted on: Sunday, January 7, 2024
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Exercise: In 400 words or less, write the beginning of
a scene in which you describe a person, place, or thing
using one or two similes.
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Similes, when sprinkled sparingly, add interest to a
story. Used effectively they can show the reader an
element of your story faster and more effectively than
straight description. Too many, and they begin to jar
the reader; too far off the mark, and they look silly.
Be alert in everyday life for the things that remind you
of something else and you'll have similes at your
fingertips when you need them to add a visual image to
your writing:
Grandma's skin draped her face like the folds of the
bedspread she'd slept under since she was thirteen.
Grandma's skin was as smooth as river rocks, and just as
firm.
Both similes give an instant picture of grandma, and
are more visual than a basic description: Grandma was
wrinkled.
These similes were visual, but you may use any of the
five senses.
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Critique by commenting on the effectiveness of the
similes to enhance the description. Were the similes
fresh and original?
Web site created by
Rhéal Nadeau and
the administrators of the Internet Writing Workshop.
Modified by Gayle Surrette.
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