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Exercise: Music to my Ears
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Prepared by: Alice Folkart
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Exercise: In 400 words or less, write a scene in which a musical
instrument is important.
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Your scene could be written from the point of view of someone hearing an
instrument being played, wanting to be able to play an instrument,
listening to someone practice (happily or unhappily), or even, if you dare,
from the point of view of the instrument itself.
You could write about an unusual instrument, something from another
culture; or about a musical instrument associated with an historical person
or event, e.g., the little drummer boy, or bagpipers rousing men for
battle, or a bugle playing Taps.
You could write about a concert experience, or about someone whose
"life" is his instrument, the virtuoso, the wannabe, or the has-been. How do you
feel about accordions? Did your mother make you practice piano / violin / kettle drums
every day when you were a kid?
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In your critique tell the author whether or not the work fits the exercise
and why. Let the author know what you think worked or didn't work, and
why.
And, in this particular exercise, you might also want to consider the
author's handling of the sense of sound, not only the physical sound, but
its emotional effect. Does he write about the sound of an instrument in
such a way that the reader will share the experience? Is the piece wildly
creative, or reassuringly factual? What did you learn from it that will
affect your own writing?
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