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Exercise: Birds of a Feather
These exercises were written
by IWW members and administrators to provide structured practice opportunities for its members. You are welcome to use them for practice as well. Please mention that you found them at the Internet Writers Workshop(http://www.internetwritingworkshop.org/).
Prepared by: Alice Folkart
Posted on: Sun, February 17, 2013
Posted on: Sun, May 22, 2016
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In 400 words or fewer, give us a literal ‘bird’s eye’ view of an event
or scene.
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How would an outdoor wedding, a farmer plowing a field, or a vehicle
racing along a highway look to a bird from the air? What does a sea
bird notice when it flies over the ocean? Would a bird be a
dispassionate observer, or would it react to what it sees? Does it
have an opinion about the behavior of other birds? Is this avian
narrator a flighty bird or a wise and solemn bird, a bird of prey or
a pretty song bird? Is the bird instinctively aware that something
it's watching might be dangerous or hazardous? Does it take any
type of self-protective action?
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In your critique consider whether or not the writer has created a
convincing ‘bird’ narrative voice and avian thought pattern. Did the
writer choose detail and vocabulary that colored and informed the
‘bird’ character?
Give the author your opinion of the story, illustrating your
statements with examples from the text
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Rhéal Nadeau and
the administrators of the Internet Writing Workshop.
Modified by Gayle Surrette.
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