Prepared by: Patricia Johnson
Posted on: November 11, 2001
Reposted on: December 7, 2003
This exercise looks at character
development - how to make a
character come
alive through the use of significant details.
(For help with this exercise, you can
check out the character chart
at
http://www.eclectics.com/articles/character.html
)
The first two parts of the exercise are
for your own benefit. Start
by listing
three to five traits of a character. For example, is your character
proud,
noble, greedy, ambitious, shy, extroverted, insecure? Make sure to
include at
least one positive and one negative trait.
Next, list 15 or so character details that
go along with one or more
of those
traits - this can be a behavior, mannerism, or whatever. For example, a
greedy
character would carefully count the change given by the cashier, a
trusting
character wouldn't. (Try to use more than one sense - would there be
something
peculiar about the character's voice and diction, for example? Would
your
character be more likely to smell of cologne or sweat?)
From that list of details, select the 5
(or so) most significant.
Use those to
write a scene of 250 to 400 words. Do *not* use the words you came up
with in
your list of traits - don't *tell* us your character is proud or shy or
whatever, *show* us!
When critiquing this story, say what
impression you got of the
character,
listing the traits you imagined. (It's not necessarily a problem if the
critics' traits don't line up with the author's - it might be a sign of
the
character evolving during the process. On the other hand, it might mean
the
wrong details were presented...)
Patricia Johnson's wrap-up
Posted on: December 15, 2003
The character details exercise's most
successful submissions created
easily
identifiable characters. This was accomplished by writing in-depth
details from
a variety of methods. The details allowed the reader to determine the
age,
setting, empathy or lack of empathy between characters. Often dialogue
and
action were used, which brought out characteristics by showing instead
of
telling. Readers drew their own conclusions without too much
explanation. The
most successful stories left the readers curious, wanting to know more
about
the characters.
Successful submissions used a mix of
physical and emotional
characteristics.
Good interaction between the different characters was employed.
Succinct word
choices and sentences allowed development in the short, challenging
word count.
Describing certain characteristics metaphorically was used as a method
in a few
stories.
Some of the main weaknesses to work out
for the next time include:
Building dimensional characters; not
listing the characteristics,
but instead
using devices to develop them inside the story; careful attention to
thoughts
of characters and POVs; keeping the narration believable and clear to
the
story's meaning; using specifics instead of broad ethereal details;
consistency
of characteristics to each character (individual believability); and
lastly,
convincing interaction between characters.
The exercise enabled critiquers to freely
interpret each character.
The
critiquers gave good feedback as to their impressions and imaginings of
the
characters.
Thanks for your participation in the
exercise. Hopefully you gained
a richer
knowledge of character development to carry into your writing.
Patricia L. Johnson
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