Prepared by: Florence Cardinal
Posted on: February 7, 2002
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This week's exercise falls into the
"Remembering" category, where we use our own memories to help us
learn how to describe various emotions or events.
"My Most Embarrassing Moment." I'm sure
most of you have seen this
heading
in magazines from time to time. For this week's exercise, we want you
to
tell us about your most embarrassing moment (or if you prefer, a less
embarrassing moment - but the more significant the event, the more we
can
learn about this emotion.).
But we want more than just a description
of the incident. We want to
know
how it made you feel. Did you go hot? Did you go cold? And please don't
tell
us your face was red. No doubt it was, but then, you can't see your own
face, can you? So - how did you know your face was red? How did it
feel?
And what about your emotional state? Did
you want to laugh? Cry?
Perhaps it
made you angry at the time. Show us how you felt. How do you feel about
it
now? Something might strike us as funny after time has passed - or it
might not...
For this exercise, in 300 words or less,
tell us about your most
embarrassing moment, including physical and emotional reactions.
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Florence Cardinal's wrap-up
Posted on: February 17, 2002
This was an interesting exercise, but not
nearly as many submissions
as
usual. Perhaps some of you have never had an embarrassing moment, or
are not
easily embarrassed. Or maybe you are too shy to tell us about these
very
painful and intimate events.
However, what were submitted were, on the
whole, well done, and
showed, not
only the incident, but how it affected you, physically and emotionally.
Little events like this are great to use in your writing, whether that
writing consists of fiction or nonfiction. They can also be developed
into
personal essays.
Thanks to everyone who submitted or
critiqued. I've enjoyed reading
them
all.
Florence
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