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IWW
Practice-W Exercise Archives
Exercise: "I Thought I Saw..."
These exercises were written
by IWW members
and administrators to provide structured practice opportunities for its
members.
You are welcome to use them for practice as well. Please mention that
you found
them at the Internet Writers Workshop
(http://www.internetwritingworkshop.org/).
Prepared by Alice Folkart
Posted on 5 July 2009
Reposted on 8 August 2010
Reposted on 13 January 2013
Reposted on 20 July 2014
Reposted on 11 March 2018
Reposted on 3 July 2022
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Exercise: Write a 400-word story that starts with "I thought I saw..."
You may write in first or third person.
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"I thought I saw..." is a fine opening for a fantasy or sci fi story,
but also a good beginning for a mystery or psychological novel, even a love
story. Did the bride think that she saw her groom's old girlfriend lurking
behind a pillar in the church? There's certainly a story there. This exercise
will give us practice in exploring the great "what if"? Think about how you'd
feel if you had seen something that you thought was impossible or didn't exist--a
dragon, an intergalactic alien, a character from your favorite book, a dead lover.
Think about how you'd feel if you'd seen something you weren't supposed to see--your
parents hiding your birthday present, the lady next door kissing the mailman, a friend
shoplifting. Would you doubt yourself, your eyesight, your sanity?
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Critiquing: Did you find the writer's take on "I though I saw... " Interesting?
Scary? Exciting? This is a good exercise to practice showing instead of telling.
Did the writer clearly relay what he saw and what the consequences were? If you
liked the piece, tell the writer why, and if you didn't, please say what it was
that didn't work for you and what might have helped it to be better.
Web site created by
Rhéal Nadeau and
the administrators of the Internet Writing Workshop.
Modified by Gayle Surrette.
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